ISCI 121-03

I chose this artifact because it shows the necessary improvements I need to focus on when I write an introduction. The comments that my professor made on my final pertained to transitioning and the proper way to organize my information. Writing is definitely not my forte, more specifically making my paper flow. I am appreciative of this feedback and will definitely look back at this paper to see the format I used when writing other introductions.

ISCI introduction proposal