Overall, a revision needed the most, and one aspect of professional writing this course has taught me, is the formatting. A centered alignment in the title of the press release is necessary to the format. This in addition to rewording the release itself into a more objective voice are crucial steps to achieving professionalism and things that have become staples in my writing because of this course.
Release
November, 11th, 2021- FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE
No More Need for Pricey Jerseys
Farmville, VA. – A remover pen with new stain eliminating technology was announced today by All Star Products
“Every sports fan has their favorite player, and with this product” says company president Jess Smith, “You don’t need to waste money on a new jersey every time a team makes a swap! Anyone can rep their favorite name with any jersey”
By using a newly crafted chemical that bonds to specific textiles, All Star Products has developed an inspiring research and scientific team to manufacture a pen to remove any logo, stain, or pattern you want” adds Dr. Richards, head researcher at All Star Labs.
The Product comes in multiple sizes, ranging from a Ultra Fine (0.2ml) pen to our new Jumbo Chisel (5.0 ml). Prices range from our smallest size at $9.99 and our largest size at maximum price of $15.99.
“With all these teams changing names, I could never figure out when the best time to buy a jersey was!” Says Guy McManerson, a participant in StrikeOut ™ research testing, “ Now, thanks to StrikeOut ™ , it’s always the best time!”
All Star Products is now offering a special deal for customers who purchase a chisel StrikeOut ™ pen before Draft season (Sept. 1st, 2022) will receive a jumbo chisel pen for free.
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For further information, please contact Daniel Winters at 434-376-2345,
email dwinters@yahoo.com